The Weekend Writing Warriors share 8 sentences over the weekend.
Here are mine (edited to fit the 8) from Exhibition…
Grace wasn’t sure how long he drew on her, teased her. His hands spoke for him as he worked in silence, but her breathing, her low torn moans became louder.
He made her soft and pliable under him.
When he leaned over her to draw up her arm, his shirt kept lightly brushing her turgid nipple to the point of pain, causing her to twist and groan; rub her thighs together.
“Be still,” he admonished with a slap to her breast.
She bucked from the pleasure of it, almost came, but he withdrew all his touch.
He left her rasping for breath as she backed away from the edge of pleasure.
Then he started again.
© Nicolette Hugo
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She already lost all notion of time. I wonder how long it’s going to last.
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Time flies when you’re having fun 😉
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Thanks for your comment. Love yours as well! You don’t happen to be on Twitter? Already found you on facebook. 😉
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Thanks for the compliment :)…no not on Twitter yet….have to get that up and running…so little time LOL. got you on facebook too!
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I saw! 😀 Once you get on Twitter, ping me. I’ll follow you faithfully. 😉
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Thanks ❤️
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Ooh. Very sexy 8. Nicely written. 🙂
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This was so sensual I can’t stand it! On my TBR list it goes! Awesome 8.
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Wow. Thank you so much ❤
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That was more effective than coffee this morning. I suddenly feel chipper. Very nicely done.
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LOL…great to hear, thanks!
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Hot! Wanted to keep reading:)
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Yay! Thank you.
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Tantalizing snippet!!
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Thank so much Karen
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“Clears throat.” Love this teaser. 😉
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LOL….thanks Jennifer ❤
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Not exactly what I prefer, but well written.
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Thanks Sue 🙂
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Erotic and very poetic too.
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Thanks so much Cara ❤
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So close, but he knows what he’s doing. She’s not getting off that easily. 😉
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He draws it out…..pun intended ;)…but for the sake of interest…I’ll post snippets more like a stone skipping over the surface than subject people to all the teasing LOL
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and you had me from “Grace wasn’t sure how long he drew on her, teased her.” Very well done snippet
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Thank you!!! ❤
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Turgid is my new favorite word! 😀 Very steamy selection and the best kind of tension!
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I am quite fond of turgid myself 😉
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This made me blush. I had to look around to see if anyone was watching me read this. Loved it! Cant wait to read more.
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Cecilia that is such great feedback…thank you!!! ❤
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Wonderful!!
Did I say wonderful??!!
I love the sensual use of words and images, a sensual delight to read!!
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Thank you Elsa ❤ ❤ ❤
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how steamy…not sure if I could take that teasing although it does seem very sensual. Man when/if she gets to come she’ll be seeing stars.
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Lucky her 😉
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Hot snippet!!!!!
Keep smiling,
Yawatta
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Thank you ❤
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Fab description. What a tease he is. 😉
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Thanks Elizabeth ❤
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