The Weekend Writing Warriors share 8 sentences over the weekend.
Here are mine (edited to fit) from Exhibition…
The snippet follows on from here
Finally, when she was sure he had gone as he said, she slowly opened her eyes. This time Grace saw herself.
Floating above her, her image in the mirror on the ceiling, her cheeks flush from the orgasm, a drawn snake twirling around her form. The wax splotches creating the effect of scales in relief. He had captured it perfectly, imbued it with life.
The snake seemed to pulsate as she breathed. It slithered up her arm towards the apple. Her hands felt wet, slightly sticky – she had sunk her nails into the apple flesh as she came.
She was Eve in the Garden of Temptation.
© Nicolette Hugo
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Perfect!!! ❤
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Thank you ❤
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Wow Nicolette! This is great!!!! I love it, it really gets the juices flowing. 🙂
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Thanks Neva ❤
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Love the Eve analogy and the picture. Such pulsating descriptions.
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Thank you Frank!
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Wow…that was awesome. The description of how she looked, the art he created with her body matched perfectly with how she felt.
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I’m glad it works! Thank you ❤
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A very powerful image and skilfully drawn by the writer. I enjoyed this exploration of sensuality.
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Thank you Daisy, that’s a lovely thing to say ❤
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Wow! Just wow. That was beautiful. So sensual and descriptive. Very nicely done, Nicolette!
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Thanks Lashell ❤ ❤
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Oh my. *fans self* I will be visiting here every week just out of sheer curiosity for whatever visuals you’ll post next. Sssssensational! 😉
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LOL thank you!!!! ❤️❤️
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Such striking and vivid imagery. Love it!
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Thanks Eleri
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Sexy and artistic! She might as well eat that apple. 😉
You’ve got an extra “what” in the sentence “It slithered up her arm toward what the apple,” from tweaking it to the 8, I bet.
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Damn…thanks for the pick up…i will edit it out 😳
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Super sexy 8! Beautiful picture you painted 😀
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Thank you Lisa ❤
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Striking and vivi description. Wonderful job.
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Thank you Tina 😃
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I hope you know I meant “vivid”;). *headdesk*
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Lol…spelling? Thats for writers 😜
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Reblogged this on Elsa Holland and commented:
Nicolette Hugo is just such a sensual writer. her weekly snippets are just delicious. Here is taste of her post this weekend. If you like, go to her site and read the snipped that precedes it.
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❤
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