The Weekend Writing Warriors share 8 sentences over the weekend.
Here are mine (edited to fit) from Exhibition…
The autumn night was crisp but he’d been bracing since he heard her voice.
“I wanted to see you,” she whispered.
“No you didn’t. Wanting to see me is picking up the phone, and telling me you’re going to be in town.”
“Why do you make it so hard?” A tear rolled down her cheek.
She was so beautiful it glittered like a goddamn diamond in the moonlight. He curled his fist to stop from reaching out and touching her.
© Nicolette Hugo
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Nicolette Hugo 
This hurts in such a beautiful way. Your words are so clean yet cut right to my heart. In only a few lines I yearn for these people you write. Magic.
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Thank you…Audrey and Jason are bittersweet…<3
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Heart wrenching. Love it. 🙂
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Thank you ❤
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oh, you really strike a chord with this. I don’t know what’s going on and yet I want to shout, “enough you two, just kiss!” 😉
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LOL….actually you want him to let this girl go so he can have the one he really should be with…but I love that the connection is still there between them when you read it…thanks for the feedback ❤ ❤
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I love the tension in this.
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thank you so much ❤
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Beautifully written. I’d love to read more.
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Thank you so much…that’s a lovely thing to say ❤
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So much emotional tension in just a few sentences—lovely! 🙂
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Ahh! Heartache at this time of morning? Too much! Too much!
Thoroughly enjoyed the little snippet!
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LOL….thank you ❤ ❤
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❤ ❤
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That last line! Great snippet.
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Thank you Cecilia 🙂
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Beautifully written emotion with so very few words. Amazing.
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Strong and deep emotions in only a few words. Great 8.
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Thanks Tina! 🙂
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Oh the emotions are raw and this was a very intense snippet. Great 8, loved the diamond tear imagery!
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Thanks so much Veronica ❤️
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Love it! I have to say I’m curious at where everything beforehand led to this scene and what comes next.
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Lots of history between an artist and his muse 😉
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Oh, I bet! 😀
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Wonderful snippet full of emotion. Well done.
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Thank you Karen…😃
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wow…you could feel the tension and emotions there. Great job!
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Glad you could feel it ❤️
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Like the dialogue and emotion.
“Why do you make it so hard?” Very realistic–I heard someone say this a couple of weeks ago when I overheard a conversation I wasn’t supposed to be listening to.
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Thats wonderful to hear…thanks so much for the feedback Nancy ❤️
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Interesting bundle of emotions evoked here. Nice.
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thank you so much ❤
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Sad but intriguing!
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Thanks William 🙂
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