The Weekend Writing Warriors share 8 sentences over the weekend.
Here are mine (edited to fit) from Exhibition…
The tremble became a shiver, fear or delight – sometimes it’s hard to tell. The body just follows what the soul wants.
She felt him before she heard him – physically at her back, his presence enveloped them.
“If you’re going to share my bed, there’s two things you should know about me, Kiki. When I give you an order I expect you to obey.”
His words crawled over her skin leaving goose-bumps in their wake. Menace and sex all rolled into one.
“And misleading me is not in your best interest.”
© Nicolette Hugo
Link to Weekend Writing Warriors and the list of other authors
Nicolette Hugo 
hmmm, that promises to be very interesting 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 🙂
LikeLike
Wonderful balance of heat an ominousness.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ❤ ❤
LikeLike
Not really my type of guy.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Linda 🙂
LikeLike
Naughty! I loved the snippet. Can’t wait to read more.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderful. Thank you ❤
LikeLike
Oooh! Dark and shivery!
(in my house, it would be, “my feet are like blocks of ice” and “I rattle windows when I snore. The neighbor’s windows” . . . no wonder I enjoy reading erotic fiction. 😀 )
LikeLiked by 1 person
LOL…thanks Sarah…glad you like 🙂
LikeLike
The soul and body are entwined, yet it’s funny how the body just follows the actions of the soul. Great description of that sensual moment – especially his words crawling over her. Great snippet!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yay! Thanks Frank ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Scary man. You are a remarkable writer with an unusual way with words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Charmaine…you’re not the first to tell me I use words differently. I speak back to front sometimes….a little romantic Yoda 😉
LikeLike
oh, chills. Loved the snippet!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Emmy ❤
LikeLike
Sensual snippet, Nicolette. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much Soibhan 🙂
LikeLike
This was lovely, Nicolette. As always. Very sensual. I can’t wait to read this book!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Lashell….next year !
LikeLike
He sounds like a man who knows what he wants (so hopefully she’ll shake up his world just enough LOL). Excellent excerpt and I loved the last line!
LikeLiked by 1 person
He has been such a great character to write :). Thanks Veronica ❤
LikeLike
Yep where can I find one of him??? Loved that snippet, they all have been very sexy and sensual.
LikeLiked by 1 person
LOL, Thank you Meka…when you find one like him let me know!!! 🙂
LikeLike
Oh, he definitely has an edge to him that is very, very interesting;). Great 8.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Tina…glad you like ❤
LikeLike
Just love your writing style …. “The body just follows what the soul wants”, close to poetry … nice!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Big smile on my face….thanks so much ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
That last line… o.o Well, I believe him!
LikeLiked by 1 person
He is a bit like playing with fire 😉
LikeLike
Sounds like he’s got her number. This snippet is delightfully sensual and just the right amount of scary. Great work.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Alexis ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLike
“Menace and sex all rolled into one.” – Hot. Great snippet. 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks so much Jennifer ❤️
LikeLike
Great snippet–Loved the last line and I see trouble
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ohh…wow… I am intrigued. This is a super steamy eight! Can’t wait to see what happens next (even though my imagination is already headed that direction…!)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much Chris …there is actually a twist to what happens next but dont want to give too much away 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
My favorite lines: The body just follows what the soul wants and “And misleading me is not in your best interest.”
Steamy!
Keep smiling,
Yawatta
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks ❤
LikeLike