The Weekend Writing Warriors and The Nuthouse Scribblers blog and share a weekend snippet from a work in progress.
Here is mine from Exhibition…
“I think you’d like to hike your skirt up and show yourself to me even more, wouldn’t you?”
Eyes still closed, this time Grace did shiver as Jason’s suggestion cut through her reverie. Hands on her upper thighs, her fingers with a will of their own started crimping the black skirt inch-by-inch from above her knee until it sat bunched in the crease of her lap. Only then did she open her heavy-lidded eyes and look unflinchingly into the blue-on-blue stare that had been watching her face, probably the whole time, and not the revealing of her panties.
“Perfect.” A slow smile before his eyes just as lazily traveled down her body and rested between her thighs. Jason brought the narrow tip of his beer bottle against the immodest red silk and traced the edge along the seam of her thigh. “Now spread wider for me…show me more, Kiki.”
© Nicolette Hugo
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Oh I so love tracing the red silk…
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“Now spread wider for me…show me more, Kiki.” Very hot and so beautifully graphic ❤ ❤
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I think I love Jason. I thought I loved Vincent….but Jason…sigh ❤
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KAPOW!!! ❤
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LOL
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Nice balance between sexual and slutty. Well done.
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Thank you 🙂
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“…look unflinchingly into the blue-on-blue stare…” Great line!
Have a merry Christmas! 🙂
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Thank you Teresa 🙂 All the best of the season to you too!
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Hot !!! 🙂
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Thanks !!! 🙂 ❤
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Wow… hot… loved the snippet!
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Yay! I’m glad you did, thanks Emmy ❤
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And what exactly is he going to do with the beer bottle? Oh no, please no. Sensual snippet. Beware, Kiki!
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Hi Charmaine. The beer bottle is safe! Promise 🙂
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A sensual and tingling snippet! I agree with Charmaine’s comment about the beer bottle. I hope he doesn’t do anything foolish with it.
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Thanks Frank. And no beer bottles will be harmed in the writing of this snippet. 😉
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You really painted a scene here. Love it.
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Thank you Cecilia ❤
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Wow Kiki! Get it girl. Great eight! Wondering what he’s going to do with that bottle. Love it!
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LOL. Thanks Neva…<3
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Love the way you ramp up the anticipation in this snippet. Languid and lovely.
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Thanks for the lovely words Alexis, there is a lot of tension between these two…
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Sizzling hot! Well done;).
Merry Christmas.
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Thanks Tina 🙂
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Nicely done, Nicolette. 🙂
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Thank you Siobhan!
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Very sensual! I expect the contrast between the cold beer and her warm skin is . . .whew! 🙂
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Yes! It’s all about the contrast….hot and cold, soft and hard….;)
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I try that again, under the right post, lol. I love their dynamics 🙂
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LOL….any comment any where is a good comment Doris 😉 . Thank you for the kind words ❤
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Any scene that starts with a line like this one does is going to be a good scene– and you don’t disappoint.
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LOL….excellent. I’m glad I didn’t and thank you ❤
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Very Sexy! I love the description.
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Thank you Linda…:)
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