#8sunday #SEXYSNIPPETS
The Weekend Writing Warriors and The Nuthouse Scribblers blog and share a weekend snippet from a work in progress.
Here is mine (unedited) from Exhibition…
She climbed on top of him and moulded herself against him, her breasts crushed against his back and her toes lay on the top of his calves.
Her head rested on Jason’s shoulder as she looked out at the twisted rows of bare vines under the moon. The barren fields created a hollow ache. A stark nothingness against the rich fullness of the evening they had shared. Every time Grace told Jason they only had three weeks, it wasn’t about reminding him, it was a note to self – this ends, don’t get comfortable.
She nuzzled into the warmth of his neck and inhaled his musky scent.
“What’s up Kiki?”
“Nothing.”
Everything.
© Nicolette Hugo
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Your writing gives me reason to reconsider a genre I’ve passed over time and again.
The scene is well described, the emotions contagious.
The message memorable.
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Thank you Chip <3…..I'll consider it a small victory then if you get intrigued enough to read the book…deep inside you may be a closet erotic romance fan 😉
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You pulled me in with this scene. I need to know more. Great job on the snippet this week.
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Thanks Cecilia…Its great to know the quieter moments work ❤
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Sounds like she’d getting very comfortable, despite herself!
This is a wonderfully bittersweet scene, Nicolette. 🙂
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“she’s” . . . Sigh . . .
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Thank you Sarah…..she wants and she shouldn’t….am glad the emotion plays out 🙂
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Wonderful evocative writing. I saw them and I felt her pain from that last word. Beautiful.
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Hi Daisy….thank you….the emotion in this story has been thicker than I though and at times I really had to wade through
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It was a lovely snippet and yes, I understand, I have something similar going on with one story. There are times it gets too much and I have to break from it for a while.
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Deep breath here. But there’s an ending in her sights. So sad.
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Thanks Charmaine. It sounds twisted, but I’m glad you feel her pain 🙂
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I’ve really missed reading your snippets. Your writing is just so … Where can I buy this book?
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Hey Lashell, for some reason this comment was hiding in my pending box. Thank you as always for your kind words 🙂 and I am happy to announce I have signed a two book deal so hopefully this story and my first one should be available sometime this year….I’m over the moon excited 🙂
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Evocative and poignant.
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Yay! Thanks for the words P.T 🙂
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An emotional, intimate scene. Nicely done with the show of description.
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Thanks for you kind words Lorien ❤
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I already hurt for them. Great snippet, I’m intrigued and can’t wait for more.
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These two keep bruising me throughout their story…..enough already LOL. Thank you for your lovely words
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so passionate in such a few lines. love the ache I could feel coming from her
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Thank you so much Michelle ❤
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I’ve been in that “nothing/everything” place. Good snippet, Nicolette. 🙂
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It feels like there’s no way to win doesn’t it? Thanks for the feedback 🙂
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I love how she has to remind herself. Sounds like she’s in for trouble. The ending is powerful – saying one thing but knowing and meaning another…says a whole lot 🙂
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She has to keep reminding herself through the story….and I kinds fell in love with him too, so I get it LOL. Thanks for your kind words.
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Poignant and lovely.
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Thanks very much Veronica ❤
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Very effective– emotionally full and written in clear, clean prose.
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Thank JT…..your kind words made me smile 🙂
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