#8sunday #SEXYSNIPPETS
Sunday snippet from a current work in progress.
Here is an unedited peek from Bought…
“Hello?” He pressed the phone against his ear.
“Jerricho Black?” The voice was feminine, hesitant.
“At your service.”
“So I’ve been told. You come recommended Mr. Black.”
He could hear a smile creep into her voice.
“Is that so?”
“Yes.” She laughed. “Highly.”
“Now you’re just flirting with me…” A smile tugged at the corners of his own lips.
She laughed again. More relaxed. “Scarlet. My name’s Scarlet.”
He waited a second but she didn’t offer a last name. “Then you know I offer very particular services, Scarlet?”
“I know. Dom for hire right?” She sounded nervous again.
“That’s what it says on the card. You haven’t done this before have you?”
“Paid someone?” There was a pause. “No. No, I don’t think I ever have.”
See, now you have me all confused and flustered. I thought Jason from Exhibition was my ultimate book boyfriend but now there is Jerricho who is wooing my affections. Can I get his card too?
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Of course honeybunny. And although he doesn’t normally do this…your first visit might be free 😉
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Oh I love this dialogue, it flows so well, the cheekiness, the flirt, the shyness … can’t wait for more 🙂
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Thanks Iris ❤
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She seems pretty confident in her approach, I wonder why she needs his services.
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She’s a gutsy gal ;)…
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I do like a smooth-talking, confident man. 🙂 And his service is intriguing—clubs (or fictional ones, anyway) sometimes have house Doms, but I assume Jerricho makes house calls?
I love that that had to pause and think before answering him. I immediately thought of all the ways we might pay for the things we need.
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Jerricho is definitely a private hire 🙂 I realised while reading your comment, that this story is very much about what we do for what we need…thanks for stopping by 🙂
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I don’t think that was what he was asking, but her response is perfect. Great snippet, Nicolette. 🙂
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You’re right that question was on more than one level 🙂 Thanks for the kind words Siobhan
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Reblogged this on Cecilia Corona.
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Thank you ❤
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ok you have my attention! Great snippet. I love how she didn’t give her last name too and he was just sitting there for a moment, waiting for her to let it slip.
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Yay! Glad it grabbed the attention. Thanks Cecilia ❤
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Very intrigued. And the conversation was perfect — a very nice set up for the story.
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Thank so much Paula ❤
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Loving their dialogue, and her timidness. I would be nervous just doing that for the first time, but even more someone with someone like him. 😉
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Thanks Jennifer. Jerricho does suck the air out of a room as she will find out 😉
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Loved the banter. You have me intrigued. Totally loved his question and the way she responded. I’m sure that’s not what he was asking. lol
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Thanks Karen…there face to face meeting is just as interesting 😉
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He seems to understand her. They might be a good fit. 🙂
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Fingers crossed 😉
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Oh Love, Love ❤
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❤
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Love this dialogue, and the characters. I’ve always liked the name Jerricho.
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Thank you Nancy. And yeah…love the name 🙂
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