#8sunday #SEXYSNIPPETS
Sunday snippet from a current work in progress.
Here is an unedited peek from Bought…
“Well what do we have here?”
The voice cracked like a whip and the kicking to his ribs immediately stopped.
Jerricho’s body screamed as he rolled on the floor and squinted at the door. Figures made hazy by the sunlight streaming in behind them. Or his eyes.
“Who the fuck are you?” Dado barked.
“The neighbourhood watch.”
He knew that voice but his brain was fuzzy. The dark shapes drifted closer, faces emerging out of the shadows.
“This is none of your business, man. Walk away.”
Killian shrugged. “My neighbourhood.” He glanced around the empty warehouse, his gaze travelling over the dead girl. “My business.”
Killian can watch my neighborhood any day.
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LOL…sounds like you’re inviting him into your backyard Cat 😉
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Yes, yes I am.
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Dead girl ? what kind of neighbourhood watch is that? Great snippet.
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LOL…..a late watch it seems Iris. Thank you ❤
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I’d like to take a longer walk around this neighbourhood so waiting for next Sunday 🙂
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Thank you so much for the kind comment Rian…I hope you do stop by 🙂
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So real. Great snippet ❤ The imagery and how Jerricho is trying to see what's happening is very powerful. Great characterization of both him and Killian. ❤
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Thank Elsa ❤
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Oh, wow! Killian is going to rescue Jerricho?
I can’t decide if he should go with that or take his chances with Dado . . .
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Sometimes better the devil you know 😉
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That’s very strange. Why ask him to walk away if there is a dead body in the room? I would say things are not what they seem to be.
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you may be right
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Oh dear, that’s intense and not a place I’d want to be. Great snippet, Nicolette. 🙂
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Thanks Soibhan 🙂
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Intriguing snippet. I really want to know more about the story.
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Yay! Thanks Paula…there’s a lot going on in this story ❤
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Hmmm, sounds like someone NEEDS to watch that neighborhood. It’s a dangerous place.
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The trash is about to be taken out 😉
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Love this snippet.
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Happy claps! Thanks Cecilia ❤ ❤ ❤
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Great scene. Dead body…A beating…Rough neighborhood. Killian sound so hot!
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LOL….thanks Jennifer. Killian is scorching….sigh…so is Jerricho when he is off the floor! 🙂
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Probably because it is only a small snippet, I was a little confused who was talking – hoever the visual you provided was EXCELLENT! Great job.
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Thanks Chelle….I wonder sometimes when I pick snippets out of bigger pieces if they’re easy to follow…I am generally very sparse with dialogue tags…I’ll keep that in mind. Thanks and for the kind words re the visual 🙂
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Tense! This neighborhood clearly needs watching. Fascinating snippet.
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Thank you Veronica
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Oh wow Nicolette, another awesome snippet! And Killian in this scene, talk about swoon worthy! even though it was a serious scene! Great job, as always😀 x
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Thanks my dear ❤
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