The Weekend Writing Warriors share 8 sentences over the weekend.
Here are mine from The Arrangement (working title)…
“Am I really a masochist?” I whisper a question I thought I’d never ask for an answer I’m not sure I want to know.
“I hope so…you show a lot of promise.”
I pull back a little, laugh off the idea and take a sip of my Caprioska.
“You make it sound like a good thing.”
“Nellie, I’m a sadist. It is a good thing.”
“I’m a feminist.”
He laughs, the sound touching things inside me and lower down.
“Fine. Be a feminist masochist then.” Genuine amusement glints in his eyes.
God help me, wanting to amuse and please this man could get addictive.
© Nicolette Hugo
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I love the sexy banter… with just that hint of darkness. Very easy to read, very easy.
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Thanks…I found as the story progressed I was really enjoying the banter that exists between them
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Oh Nicolette you really are very good!! I love it 🙂 Great dialogue, wonderful characters, both full of strength as they work towards what they want, great combination!!
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Thank you for the compliment Elsa. I have enjoyed my time with these characters and its bittersweet wrapping up their story but also exciting to give it life 🙂
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It’s a nice playful excerpt and you clearly know the characters really well. That’s definitely working in your favor.
However, as a WeWriWa moderator I have to say that I count over 8 sentences. We do need everybody to stick to 8 to keep the blog hop fair for the whole list. Thanks for understanding.
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Aack….I have 9….sorry…thanks for stopping by and correcting my maths 🙂
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Nice dialogue. Really like that last line!:)
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Thanks Eleri….
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Great dialogue. I think she’s already addicted even if she doesn’t realize it yet. Can’t wait to read more.
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Thanks Alexis. I loved your stuff too….come back and visit again when there is more 🙂
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The dialogue is light and flows well. Sounds like she’s falling…
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But is he ?????
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