The Weekend Writing Warriors share 8 sentences over the weekend.
Here are mine (edited to fit) from Exhibition…
“Hey.” Logan cornered Grace on the balcony.
“Hey yourself. Good vibe tonight, Logues.”
“Living is better than dead, Gracie. You should try it.”
“Jesus Logan, why don’t you just come out and say what you think?”
He laughed. “Fuck…I can’t create if I’m always trying to filter myself now can I?”
© Nicolette Hugo
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Nicolette Hugo 
Beautiful. Love the way Logan seems to bring the lighter everyday out in both Grace and Jason!
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I like Logan more than I should a secondary character…I keep wanting to give him page time LOL
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I love that last line—he has a point . . . and a terrific excuse for whatever he wants to say! 😀
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Thank you Sarah….he kinda does 😉
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Whenever I’ve written something like this, or shared something with this type of tone/fluidity to someone who is a “nonreader,” they’re like what the hell are they talking about? But it makes perfect sense to me. And so does this. I love that they’re in their own world and it’s fraught with a tenseness that only a certain intimacy can create. Wonderful!
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Intriguing snippet, Nicolette. 🙂
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Thanks….there are some wonderful moments with Logan in the story ❤️
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hehe, that last line is so great! 🙂
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Thank you ❤
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Love the last line, great snippet.
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Snappy dialogue. This snippet makes me want to find out more about these characters.
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Thanks Alexis, that’s great to hear 🙂
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Love the last line! 🙂
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Thank you Karen 🙂
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Great dialogue! This guy has an answer for everything, doesn’t he?
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Yes – what is it about these rock stars and their egos? 😉
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The dialogue is great. Nicely done!
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Thank you Lashell ❤ ❤
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“Living is better than dead…” What a great line. Nice work!
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Makes me happy to hear that. Thank you ❤️
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Love the ease of the conversation. “Living is better than dead…” so very true.
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Thanks Meka 🙂
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I liked it, excellent dialog, very “real”. Great snippet!
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Thank you very much Veronica ❤
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That was a sort of mean comment. I can feel her dislike of him and understand why.
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He is coming from a good place…friends sometimes have to call it like they see it to help us ❤️
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very real dialogue and great last line.
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Thanks Iris ❤
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